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Post by Nandeesh Jolad on May 16, 2013 3:43:46 GMT -5
i wrote a poem when i was 15, imagining what if all the humans beings, animals die on earth n only one man survives on earth, how his feelings will be ??, what could b his pain, sorrows?? how he expresses himself his frustration, pain, agony, and how he realizes his brutal behaviours, his insane activities, that he done before, and the title of my poem is ''AN END OF HUMAN DESTINY ON EARTH''. My english professor liked the poem very much, and congratulated me, and its my first poem too..
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Post by George on May 16, 2013 5:21:44 GMT -5
I would break in a bookstore, take a book of flight lessons, and then I'll go the airport to take one airplane and travel around the world.
Maybe I'll go to a pet shop to get a dog too for company XD
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Post by aleedx on May 16, 2013 5:23:22 GMT -5
i wrote a poem when i was 15, imagining what if all the humans beings, animals die on earth n only one man survives on earth, how his feelings will be ??, what could b his pain, sorrows?? how he expresses himself his frustration, pain, agony, and how he realizes his brutal behaviours, his insane activities, that he done before, and the title of my poem is ''AN END OF HUMAN DESTINY ON EARTH''. My english professor liked the poem very much, and congratulated me, and its my first poem too.. do you still have your poem in you? post it in here.  |
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Post by Nandeesh Jolad on May 16, 2013 5:35:01 GMT -5
yes i've the poem and definitely i will post it here, but its a long poem. Whenever i read the poem i get a feeling i could've written far more better way, but i dont like to edit it, since it was my first poem..
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Post by FPEPro on May 16, 2013 9:09:18 GMT -5
The one big problem with this "what if" is if everyone was gone, the electrical grid would shutdown shortly because of the lack of people keeping it operational. No electricity means no running water in most cities, and even gasoline would become extremely hard to get since it is usually pumped into a car, plane, or boat via an electrical pump from underground tanks. Food reserves would spoil quickly meaning you would be forced to hunt and gather, or farm pretty quickly. It would be a very much different world. A ghost town everywhere, where nothing works anymore. To me, that sounds pretty depressing. Liberating too, but still depressing.
Chris
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Post by apache2k12 on May 17, 2013 10:21:15 GMT -5
i wrote a poem when i was 15, imagining what if all the humans beings, animals die on earth n only one man survives on earth, how his feelings will be ??, what could b his pain, sorrows?? how he expresses himself his frustration, pain, agony, and how he realizes his brutal behaviours, his insane activities, that he done before, and the title of my poem is ''AN END OF HUMAN DESTINY ON EARTH''. My english professor liked the poem very much, and congratulated me, and its my first poem too.. We will love to read that poem .. |
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Post by apache2k12 on May 17, 2013 10:24:12 GMT -5
The one big problem with this "what if" is if everyone was gone, the electrical grid would shutdown shortly because of the lack of people keeping it operational. No electricity means no running water in most cities, and even gasoline would become extremely hard to get since it is usually pumped into a car, plane, or boat via an electrical pump from underground tanks. Food reserves would spoil quickly meaning you would be forced to hunt and gather, or farm pretty quickly. It would be a very much different world. A ghost town everywhere, where nothing works anymore. To me, that sounds pretty depressing. Liberating too, but still depressing. Chris Atleast we will learn to respect mother nature .. |
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Post by Nandeesh Jolad on May 18, 2013 10:07:05 GMT -5
apache2k12 and aleedx i've shared my poem here in this forum, read it and give your opinion..
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Post by Nandeesh Jolad on May 20, 2013 2:52:45 GMT -5
i wrote a poem when i was 15, imagining what if all the humans beings, animals die on earth n only one man survives on earth, how his feelings will be ??, what could b his pain, sorrows?? how he expresses himself his frustration, pain, agony, and how he realizes his brutal behaviours, his insane activities, that he done before, and the title of my poem is ''AN END OF HUMAN DESTINY ON EARTH''. My english professor liked the poem very much, and congratulated me, and its my first poem too.. We will love to read that poem .. (17.03 KB) apache2k12, hi, this is my poem, please do read it n give u r opinion..  |
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Post by Nandeesh Jolad on May 20, 2013 2:54:15 GMT -5
i wrote a poem when i was 15, imagining what if all the humans beings, animals die on earth n only one man survives on earth, how his feelings will be ??, what could b his pain, sorrows?? how he expresses himself his frustration, pain, agony, and how he realizes his brutal behaviours, his insane activities, that he done before, and the title of my poem is ''AN END OF HUMAN DESTINY ON EARTH''. My english professor liked the poem very much, and congratulated me, and its my first poem too.. do you still have your poem in you? post it in here. (17.03 KB) aleedx, hi, this my poem, please read it and give u r opinion. |
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Post by apache2k12 on May 21, 2013 12:12:53 GMT -5
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Post by Hellfire on May 22, 2013 14:11:27 GMT -5
I would be scared. Not quite sure what I would do, actually. That would be a tough pill to swallow, that's for sure.
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